First full draft for " The Complexity of Self."

This is the first completed draft of " The Complexity of Self" I was recommended to not over detail this drawing so I thought I would just send it out as is and see what everyone thinks. You will see a bunch of flaws and mistakes but over all I am liking the direction it's going. I still feel like maybe I should take a little further but I could be wrong. I am learning this as I go. I'm self taught.. I think you can tell LOL